Wow, thanx for you coment btw~!
and yeah, u are good at writing poems.. im not good with the rhyming part, unless i do it by accident.. lol, but yeah...
i could feel how much u love kris!..
"You are not my first love, but my last"
and that is sweet!:)
thanx, ~mickey~

THis is good, it's quiet short but still conveys alot of emotion in it. I'd recommend taking away the exclamation mark at the end cause I think when poems end with this ! it makes them sound less genuine.
I thought this line stood out in particular 'You are not my first love, but my last' it just makes it sound like you really know what you are saying here, and gives the poem even more feeling. Nice work :)