Very good poem. capitalize the first word in each line.
~~Sweetie

The memories of my mind.

Wow.. very beautiful poem =).. it caught my attention because im graduating this year and im kinda upset by that cuz i dont wanna forget all the memories.. it sens a very good message to hold on to our memories.. it flowed very nicely and has such a nice meaning to it =)

I especially like the last line just because what it says is so truthful =)
great job keep it up =)

--emotionless19*