My suicide nursery rhyme

by melinda   Dec 2, 2005


Pain, pain
go away
if you dont
then i just may
kil myself
before the next day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Reall y good poem 5/5
    thank you for all your comments

    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by *my*fallen*angel*

    Thank you for the comment on my poem, it made me smile! its nice to know that there are people out there that care:) your a good writer! well done! :D

    caz xoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Malene

    Aww.. you lost yr daddy too?
    hope you is ok hunnie

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    Ur so talented and ur poem is fantastic keep up da great work!! Mwaz Stephy :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Awesome job, really good, I wrote a similar poem today, Tears-Nursery Rhyme except it is much longer than this, but it involves the same idea, check it out maybe if you get the chance but anyways, I liked this poem alot, keep up the good work.

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