Awesome job, really good, I wrote a similar poem today, Tears-Nursery Rhyme except it is much longer than this, but it involves the same idea, check it out maybe if you get the chance but anyways, I liked this poem alot, keep up the good work.

Ur so talented and ur poem is fantastic keep up da great work!! Mwaz Stephy :)

Aww.. you lost yr daddy too?
hope you is ok hunnie

Thank you for the comment on my poem, it made me smile! its nice to know that there are people out there that care:) your a good writer! well done! :D

caz xoxoxox

Reall y good poem 5/5
thank you for all your comments

love always
tabby