I very much like the idea of writing about seasons, and both of you are very talented, the only thing I didn't like is how often you used the same words in description. like flowers you mentioned them like three times, if you ponder your poem a while you might be able to project the same point you intended but say it differently and more intriguing> I might just be rambling though, and take my comment however, in the end I enjoyed it very much, and read it several times

..Wow.. that poem is just amazing you guys! Very nice job! *claps* both this and the other part are great!