Thin Bloody Trails

by w!th0utyou   Dec 2, 2005


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Then bloody trails
they decorate my skin
through letters
hearts and stars

Thin bloody trails
help release my pain
close to the skin

Thin bloody trails
I must hide you from them
they can't see you
they mustn't find you

Thin bloody trails
your killing me now
I'm getting weaker

Thin bloody trails
made by a thin shiney blade
take my life away

scars real deep
attention - i do not seek
body a little cold
I'll never grow old

my life was taken
now everyone is shaken
don't cry
it wasn't my choice to die

a little upset
slipped a little to far
a big bloody cut
from a tiny razor blade

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  • 18 years ago

    by xEmmax

    Wow, incredible poem, it was v.moving, i can really relate to everyword, u couldn't have written this more perfectly, 5/5. just amazing.
    take care,
    xxemmaxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Oooh, i liked this, it's really sad and quite moving, i especially liked the last part, awesome writing 5/5 x

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