Damn, that was emotional, great writing 5/5 x

Its a good poem. And I understand why you capatalized it all, to show the anger, but erm.. if you wouldn't do that, it would look a lot better. =)

That was a really excellent poem. Great work. Keep it up

Love Chantelle

Ramy, I really love this poem. I can relate to it. I whish you happy days. Feel free to read my poem called All of Me. Thanx for sharing your feelings.

Hey Ramy, i only found 1 spelling mistake!! lol, *break
great work though, i amseriously loving the images ur poems evoke wihtin my head.
totally tripping.

ur friend, Suzie

You did an outstanding job on this poem. It had great imagery and flow.

Awwww that was reli touching :'(
I totally loved this poem :). the reason why am readin' it is bcuz I saw it in the contest! You reli deserved much more :)
keep it up and good luck (am gonna check the other ones ;)
L0v
N3ma x0x0x0x0x