Dear Friend

by Charles   Dec 2, 2005


Dear Friend,

I thank you for stabbing me
in the back.
Dear friend you laugh at me and put me down
Dear friend your so kind to me
the beatings you gave me
have scarred me for life
what was it you used again?
oh yeah, it was a knife.
you stabbed me thrice. my face
bleeding like the murky waters of
the red sea.
Dear friend, my heart beats slowly, coldly waiting for death.
It tries to come with every breath. knocking at the door of my heart for permission.trying to complete its dastardly mission.
Dear friend, you smile as you say goodnight.
Dear friend ,my breath is getting shorter,
please get me some water, to quench my everlasting thirst.
Dear friend, what you do not know is i am not dead, but please look under the bed.
You're under arrest dear friend, but this is the end. not for me but for you.
I thank you once again for paying me a visit. but let me add: ITS LIFE IN PRISON!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bethan

    Dis 1 wos actually quite disturbing!!!! I liked it but it's jus quite dark n sad which r things I never rly associated wit u charles!
    NEway it;s a great poem, it's very emotional and original and 2 me it flows with the emotion and feelings which I think helps strengthen the emotion of the poem. 1 thing tho......U need 2 write sme more poems cos ur gud!!!!
    lots of love,
    Beth xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Cari

    Omg, is this true? its really sad either way. i hope you are ok. u seem to be a great writer, from what i have read, you want to try to get ur message across and ur not afraid to let ppl know, i like that. great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    You can defiantly sense the intence emotion through every word. 5/5 none to less.

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    By gum chuck...wasn't feeling terribly good when you wrote this one huh, lol. well i liked it. creative and intelligent wording, and full of depth

    Brad

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