By gum chuck...wasn't feeling terribly good when you wrote this one huh, lol. well i liked it. creative and intelligent wording, and full of depth

Brad

You can defiantly sense the intence emotion through every word. 5/5 none to less.

*> : PainOfOne

Omg, is this true? its really sad either way. i hope you are ok. u seem to be a great writer, from what i have read, you want to try to get ur message across and ur not afraid to let ppl know, i like that. great job!

Dis 1 wos actually quite disturbing!!!! I liked it but it's jus quite dark n sad which r things I never rly associated wit u charles!
NEway it;s a great poem, it's very emotional and original and 2 me it flows with the emotion and feelings which I think helps strengthen the emotion of the poem. 1 thing tho......U need 2 write sme more poems cos ur gud!!!!
lots of love,
Beth xxxxxxx