Apple in my Eye

Beautiful!
Again after reading this poem, I can relate myself to it.
I was in love with this girl and she was so pretty just like an angel you described in your poem, but she was so modest that she always talked about the other girls who were nothing compared to her beauty.
This Lil piece of your reminded me of her.
Thanks mate.

Lol awesome poem..But i got a question. In the 5th stanza do you really mean shin like the one on your leg or chin as the one on your face or something that i don't know what shin means lol. But other than that it was amazing.
-vino

p.s. thanks for all your critism

This is deep, and unusually for me, i couldn't find any errors haha. i really enjoyed this poem and i think the last stanza was the most powerful because it was succint and obvious, which is sometimes necessary for this sort of poem.

Hey that was good keep it up 5/5

Amazing poem, so cute and sweet, any girl would be lucky to have you!! take care xxx