Haha I wish I had a boyfriend or ex writing such breath taking poems. Haha I would die for this!

I'm sorry, It's just that, when I read this, there's so much love in it... so I was thinking bout my ex's haha.

Very well done Brad. It's excellent. So much love, so sweet, *hugs*

There ain't many that can write like this. They might feel this way, but they are unable to express it. And you can, and that... is a wonderful gift.

Shit.. I don't believe in gifts. You worked for it, it's not a gift from heaven..damn.. haha Oh I'm so sorry I'm in a very weird mood.

Lotsaaa love! Take care Brad -xxx-

Ps: thank you so much for you comment (on I don't care), it meant a lot to me. Haha, funny that you found it amuzing. You ain't twisted. You are right, maybe I should have put it in the section humor hahah! =)

-xxx-

Awww, for me? Brad, you shouldn't have (LOL). Seriously, I think I just fell in love with your poetry, and this is only the first one I've read of yours. This poem is so beautiful. It conveys such deep feeling emotion. I love it.

Amazing poem, so cute and sweet, any girl would be lucky to have you!! take care xxx

Hey that was good keep it up 5/5

This is deep, and unusually for me, i couldn't find any errors haha. i really enjoyed this poem and i think the last stanza was the most powerful because it was succint and obvious, which is sometimes necessary for this sort of poem.

Lol awesome poem..But i got a question. In the 5th stanza do you really mean shin like the one on your leg or chin as the one on your face or something that i don't know what shin means lol. But other than that it was amazing.
-vino

p.s. thanks for all your critism

Beautiful!
Again after reading this poem, I can relate myself to it.
I was in love with this girl and she was so pretty just like an angel you described in your poem, but she was so modest that she always talked about the other girls who were nothing compared to her beauty.
This Lil piece of your reminded me of her.
Thanks mate.