Love

by Bill Turner   Dec 2, 2005


Black as my heart
Broken like the Titanic
Cracked like the Liberty Bell
Love is

Gut wrenching
Foul
Straight from hell
Love is

A bed of nails
Glass through the skin
Hopeless
Love is

Empty
Hollow
Forgotten
Love is

Lonely
Unforgiving
Pain
Love is

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  • 18 years ago

    by Felicia

    I love it why does it have such a low rateing? This is Talent! lol heres a 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    Wow that was amazing. so true. 5/5 if you get a chance check out my poems and tell me what you think!!
    ~lilia~

  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Can't get over how talented you are at writing... great job!! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by cLumsy

    So touching and beautiful! its a different phrasing, but i love how you can capture the reader's attention with short words! great job! ;D 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    I am so sorry you have these feelings my friend ... but one day at a time ..yes !!
    If only we knew the answers , life and love would be so much easier .

    I can clearly see your pain in this write and now I know the meaning behind it . If you need a friend to talk to , you know I am always there ....
    ~Hang in there dear friend ~
    Sending you my love ...

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