Well.... Very nicely written, I can tell alot of emotions went into this writing... The ones that express those feelings clearly create the masterpieces of literature... Your one of those people... People who can express their emotions flawlessly.... A creator of master pieces... Check out some of my writings, they dela with the loss of my girlfriend to another.... I think writing helps everyone to get emotions that they can't bear to keep inside out...

Much luv,
Josh