I liked the poem.

I could not excatly understand the last but one stanza. Better word phrasing and idea could have been used there.

This poem made me cry...it reminded me of the past with my baby and its actually happenin right now...great way with words u got...keep it up mama...and keep ur head up cuz he'll be back...well byez and thanks 4 ur comment...5/5

Aww this is sad... actually brought a tear to my eye which is pretty rare actually! =P Welldone hun... i am adding you to my favourites... cant wait to see what else you come up with in the future!!