Boy or girl ?????

by IzL   Dec 2, 2005


Two babies were falling from heaven to earth .
Both so tiny, pretty
and butt naked from head to toe.
They only had a blanket covering them both.
"Where are we?"
one asked the other
"I don't know I think we are in our crib."
"oh, what are you a boy or girl ???"
"I'm a girl!!" answered the little one
"What about you ???"
"mmmm let me check", the baby looked under his blanket, then he looked at the girl and said "I'm a boy!!!!"
"How do you know?" asked the baby girl
"Oh that's easy ...I have blue shoes!"

I tried my best to make it rhyme, hope you like it

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  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey Miller

    Their are a couple spelling errors...other than that its isnt that bad. Good for you to try and make it rhyme!

  • 18 years ago

    by xxxStarSxxx

    OMG how funny! I love the ending! it was so unexpected! It just made my day!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hey...tell me if you wrote more okay? Can't wait...

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    That was a cute poem
    the ending was a nice twist

  • 18 years ago

    by rebeccaxX

    Its so cute, i like it allot