Ha ha, that's really cute. Good job. Keep writing and take care. And thanks for the comment on mine.
> Kiesha

Cute poem...actually made me smile...please note that i do not hev a sense of humor...so I'm gonna rate it 5...

Haha this is really funny! one of the best jokes i have heard in a long time! and its ok if you tried to ryme! it sounded great either way ryme or not!!!

Cute poem but the spelling ahhhhh its terrible!!
-courtie x0x0x

I like it, it's very cute, and clever!

Hey this is gd lol funny
keep up the good work

It is sooo good!!

Great Poem!

LOLZ!

Keep writing!

(Could you please comment on my poems? Thanks)

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thats really funny.

Very funny poem...I thought it was going to end different...you had me going for a sec..lol...well one of the best that i've read in awhile so I have to give it a five

Lol hehe dats realyy sweet and cute..lol
xxx
5/5 plz comment mine too!
thanx

Funny poem I love it!

Sounds more like a joke than a poem

GOOD JOB ON THIS POEM ITS PRETTY FUNNY LOL AND THE RYME WAS PERFECT TAKE CARE

That was fairly funny, babys talking is news to my ears though :P lol

mark xxx

Its so cute, i like it allot

That was a cute poem
the ending was a nice twist

Hey...tell me if you wrote more okay? Can't wait...

OMG how funny! I love the ending! it was so unexpected! It just made my day!

Their are a couple spelling errors...other than that its isnt that bad. Good for you to try and make it rhyme!