I cry everynight sent you be gone
Do you mean since?
This poem was more thoughts than anything. Try writing from your heart and soul then you're mind and if you do that we'll be able to feel it. YOu might want to add some details so we can imagine your words too.

Thanks for you voice

I thought that this was good although i want you to work on a little something for me: although your rhyme schemes make it very easy for anybody to read and relate, maybe you could make them a bit more complex and constructive-this is my only constructive critiscim. Despite that i liked the raw emotion that came out and thought it was a well structured piece. Good Work

Sondos

Its a good poem. It touches the heart. Good job, Mechelle.

Im ahh totally speechless... short, sweet, yet breath-taking at the same time.. amazing job... keep writing you have talent.. read sum of mine and let me know wut u think of them..

**meggie**

It was good but some of your words didnt make sense. Like, shouldn't 'sent' be 'since' and 'it' be 'it's'? Other than that, pretty good. 4/5