Its fab, (fanastic) your a good writer, well done!!! :):):) i look forward to reading more of these poems :):):)

This was one of the good short poems I have ever read. keep it up.
take care,
marjan

Dude its great!!

Wow i like it verry much 10/10 for effort it may be short and may look week but the thoughts of a man id did tweek!!

well done forever your silent helping hand

REX