Dying Rose

by Gesselle Valle   Dec 2, 2005


On a Glass Next To Me
There Sits a Dying Rose
About To Fall Apart
From My Feelings Of Broken Heart

A Red Beautiful Rose...
I try To Find The Right Place
That Could Remind Me Of Your Face
And Next To Me I Found A Space.

Now, As I See The Dying Rose
I Wonder If Its The End?
Fears Take Over My Heart
And Tears Over My Soul.

What A Sweet Rose It Was...
But Now Sits There, Slowly Dying.
All This Cruel Infirmity,
Was Not Supposed To Last An Eternity.

Looking At The Dying Rose
I realized That Without You I'd Be Lost
And Like The Dying Rose
Our Love's Dying Away And Soon I'll Be Lost.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Poet

    Wow that wuz sad but its a really good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0hhhhhh that was sad hun its t0uhing deep em0ti0nal. very well written. 0hh g0od j0b!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Gesselle,

    This was such a sensational heartfelt write. Your words always consume the reader entirely, this poem is yet another piece of exceptional writing.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    By the way i didnt mean your wasting your gift i was just saying that it was really good and keep writing
    sorry
    em
    lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow you have a gift dont waste it
    thanks for sharing it with me
    could you commment on one of mine please?
    if not it doesnt matter
    Em

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