by myshiningstar14 Dec 2, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Your loneliness lingers, and is a monster in the night. It creeps within your broken soul. The world you once knew, you now love to hate. And with every breath you take, your tears become even more alive. This became your depression. |
by Tripp
Oh, and if you cut, you have to realize that cutting never solves the issue, no matter how you feel. cutting yourself only gets you in deeper shit... |
by Tripp
Very strong emotions here. i like the repetition you use in most, if not all of your poems...keep up the good work |
by angie A
Another fantasic poem i loved it! i can totally relate to this poem! i love how you word things so well! i like your ways of writting sooo fantastic! 5/5 |
Its really simple read ti again..its abotu a girl whose life is falling abpaart because of ehr depression lol LISSA |
Hmm...can't say I fully understand it...but the words are awesome.,.. |