"Shock forms silence
Not a sound from your mouth nor hers"

I love that part. I'm not good at thinking of comments- especially when every poem you write is superrific! love you...

I like it it has a true meaning to it i love the way you used the words very nice job they are powerful

-Josiah

An oldie but a goodie! great poem!

I like it but the one this i quesion is when you stated avoiding disappointment..... nothing should be avoided ..... you need to face everything head on because if you dont it wont truly be resolved and it wont truly go away

Truly a remarkable piece, blush. ^_^x

Thank you.