The Human Touch

by RainbowSlider   Dec 2, 2005


I am more than
black words on
white paper.
How dare you
replace me
with inanimate
objects.
A human
has feelings, wants,
desires and needs
A human has emotions.
mood changes,
and real skin.
A human is more
than a romance novel.
A human has thoughts
Touch me
as I touch you.
Give to me
as I give to you.
Accept me
as I accept you.
Take from me
as I take from you.
A human touches
other humans.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    I really like the beginning of the poem, infact i think that the beginning of the poem is great. it gets weak as the poem goes on and for one reason mainly. you repeat a lot of words. and i'm sorry because i know the last time i commented on one of your poems i mentioned the repitition too. but i think once you fix this up the poem would be presented stronger and the meaning would shine through more. i like the idea of the poem too!

    ~Jacklyn

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