Why

by UnToLd TrUtH   Dec 2, 2005


I can't move
I can't breathe
Why did you leave me?
What did I do?
Couldn't I fix it,
Was it someone else,
Please tell me
It hurts so much
Why!
Why did you leave me forever?

**this is my first poem on here so tell me what you think**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Mirabile

    Pretty Awesome!!!!!!!!! keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Pretty good...considering it's the first poem...very good...

  • 18 years ago

    by Raychel

    I love it!! my first poem sux (walk part one) and this TOTALLY blows mine out the water!!

  • 18 years ago

    by sammy jo

    Well its a good poem i liek it alot!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tess

    Hey gorjuz, I get the feeling of being stunned and numb when I read this. This I can relate to since suffering from depression. Anyway, as I have said many times before- keep up the great work! =) xxx

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