Come Along Child

by Jacklyn   Dec 2, 2005


Come along my dear child
as I release you in the world
When necessary I'll offer a shield
just take my example, use it well
My dear child, we'll work it through

Come along my dear child
to you I'll offer my support
as you grow and take it on
learning to survive on your own
Watching you thrive, out grow me now

Come along my dear child
the one who isolates it's self
A little push to help you through
your size is small, influence strong
Learning exactly what I taught

Come along my dear child
benefiting the journey traveled
a better outcome than before
Strong relations between the two
giving independence with a smile

Come along my dear child
A chance to turn around your world
offering hope to those like you
Helping you learn a new truth
flourishing love and thankfulness

~each stanza represents a different child.

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  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    I like this poem! :-) You are really good at metaphors and similes and stuff like that. Yea Jacklyn, luv Bus Buddy :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey Miller

    This is a very wonderful poem! It shows many morals in it. You have very good poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by cum n get me !!!!! lol

    Keep it up this is great.
    really can touch the heart
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem huni..
    truly an original idea..great.
    Keep writing xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    HI there! how are you? its been awhile but I'm finally back. what's up? what's new?

    I see you've been writing up a storm..lol. It will take me awhile to read all of your new poems. this one is absolutely beautiful and refreshing. I love the topic. terrific job as always. keep up the good work. look forward to reading more soon. take care