Comments : Come Along Child

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    HI there! how are you? its been awhile but I'm finally back. what's up? what's new?

    I see you've been writing up a storm..lol. It will take me awhile to read all of your new poems. this one is absolutely beautiful and refreshing. I love the topic. terrific job as always. keep up the good work. look forward to reading more soon. take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Awesome poem huni..
    truly an original idea..great.
    Keep writing xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by cum n get me !!!!! lol

    Keep it up this is great.
    really can touch the heart
    xxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Audrey Miller

    This is a very wonderful poem! It shows many morals in it. You have very good poetry.

  • 18 years ago

    by DancingForGod

    I like this poem! :-) You are really good at metaphors and similes and stuff like that. Yea Jacklyn, luv Bus Buddy :-)