This is an awesome poem, Rhi! That's great how you relate real life to poetry, even when it's bad. =)

WOW!! Rhiannon thats amazing! I always thought of you as an awsome poetry writer. It has alot of depth and meaning....It really touches a person heart.

Wow.. I've lost a lot a friends lately. but Ive decided that after what they did to me, they weren't really my friend to begin with, clearly thats not the case for you and Im sorry you have to go thru that. but ur poem is wonderful and thanks a lot for your comment! Im a total perfectionist and i appreciate them more than you kno!