Oh goodness dear...I hope you never cut yourself hun..ITs a bad habboit and iv had to get alot of friends out of it....Please dont ever cut..When you get mad punch somethin or hit a tree thatll let your anger out just dont cut yourself hun...Great poem 5/5..

~Mallory

Wow that was EXTREMELY POWERFUL! Its an interesting idea, to committ suicide by accident. I have tried before, several times, but now since reformed . . . mostly, and you described the emotions of that plus cutting ( I am that too,) extremely well! Great job hun!

-Mikochan

Omg i hate cutters not u but mi sis does but great job with the poem!!!!

Hey hun, Thanks for you comment on my poem Escaping- what you said means a lot to me! =P I really related to this poem. I have attempted suicide endless times and yeah! Thanks again and keep writing- you will go far! xxx

I like that poem well,keep up the good work .

WOW! omg i love this poem i was a cutter to i have not cut in like two mnths and well yeah its hard to stop!

Wow this is an exceptional poem. i feel like i can relate. thank you for commenting on my poem. this is great. its a perfect example of how poems don't have to rhyme to be powerful.

love

kelcie

I love the ending, its inspiring.

Oh my, oh me!!! I love this! So hearfelt, full of emotion!! I hope you really did not do this, love!

Take care.
Love
xx Belle xx

Well good poem, lass. Loved it 5/5

-SapphireFNevois-

OMG Ur really gud

Another deep poem but very good indeed keep it up xx

I honestly don't know what to say. There is nothing new, original, or worth reading in this write. It seems you have put no real thought into it because this type of thing have been written again and again. It's not impressive and isn't poetry as far as I'm concerned. Just a teenage angst cutting rant.

Wow...this is...wow...i'm...speechless...i loved it so much...so much...emotion...so sad...so dark...5/5.

This poem was very effective I think. It really got the point across that you can accidently kill yourself because of cutting. But also I think that you got the perspective of a cutter, that yeah I did this, but it's alright now. good job!

This poem is excellent i give it a 5/5

Love it..
cutting is such a dangerous viscious cycle
:(
if you need help ever just email me ok
i know what its like..
pretty good poem too
could be more.. poetic?
hang in there
xoxo

I like this but it was strange how you kind of jumped "The pain is so strong it's like getting stabbed by a 1000's of times over and over again.
But I can't stop
I slice and slice.
I realize i have cut to deep." You start saying what it is like but you go in to a story.. I do like the main theme though..

Very Good Write.
4/5

-Rachel

Omg this is sooo deep and full of emotion.
it is a very sad poem, but you did such a great job writing it.
i can relate to the cutting, as i cut myself too.
great job on this! 5/5

~Kristina

That was a well written poem!
i liked it alot...
i could feel the emotions in it and all