Your hands on my body,
that slide down my side,
the sweet smell in the air,
as your down to my thigh
You move in so close,
it almost feels as your me,
the innocence in my life,
feels like it could never be.
Your touch is so gentle,
When you move your body with mine,
as you kiss me on the forehead,
and your carressing with time.
The steam fills the air,
as the sun starts to rise,
the whole world seems to fade,
and I keep getting lost in your eyes.
Plz comment on this poem it would really mean a lot to me cuz i dont' know what you would all think of it and i would really like to know if i should keep trying to write, or if i should just give up !! Thanx
