Good poem, i like the feeling it has. =) we all spend too much time looking in the past. bad dirrection to be looking in too hehe. great job. thanx for sharing

I love this poem everything about it espcially the ending 5/5

This is a great poem! A lot of emotion and sadness. Excellent job!

Tiffany.xox.

Its very good. i really liked it. *5/5*

This was a nice poem. It was sad and it made me really feel. excellent job.

I like this one, it really shows how painful the past can be and how we can't get rid of it in our minds, cus it's "framed". I feel that way, each day.
Amazing poem.

I like this piece very much. The sence that i get from reading it is great. It shows the past and how painful it can be at time. It was really well thought out. The flow could use a bit of work i feel,but other than that its excellent. Kat

So true so good! The flow was great! Not alot of ryhmes in the end but all the same it was good! Please return the favor!

Wow this is a really sad poem. I like the melancholic atmosphere that it holds. I love hwo you wrote it and the effect that you gave it by the punctuation and how you worded things. Great job.

Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

O wow that was ace! 5/5! wow really visualising and stuff! haha arn't I good at coments? :p

How sad. it made me want to cry with a smile on my face. very nice. i loved the 'frothey beer bubbles' line. so good. i can relate to this poem very well. i think you did a great job here!! 5 for you!!! :) -beav