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by sillylittlegirl Dec 3, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Sitting in a crowded room alive and alone I thought that you saw me I guess that I was wrong you walked right past me I was beaten and abused because of you I was feeling so used now sitting in a lonely place alive yet so cold but it's too late now my soul has been sold walking through a dark place I see a bright light you told me to stay away from it but now I know you're right I really should have listened I really shouldn't have gone but now I hope you're happy you were right and I was wrong
by Teria
Wow, amazing poem darling. The flow was amazing, actually flawless. (: You did a wonderful job with it. The emotion was outstanding. It made me want to cry, I can honestly ralate to it, one hundred percent. good job. amazing word choice as well, it was almost perfect. (: keep it up, hun.