Must be the rain

by Casey   Dec 3, 2005


As the rain falls harder
It pounds louder on the roof.
Much like the life in my chest.
You pause and I'm afraid,
I'm afraid you heard it beating fast.
"Must be the rain"
You say as you smile
Knowing what it was I feared.
Never hearing,
but you saw it in my eyes
So I close them tight.

Thunder rolls in on our lazy day
And through the thunder
With my head resting on your chest
I hear the life in you.
You're smiling
Closing your eyes drifting off.
"Must be the rain"
I whisper

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  • 18 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I liked it, it didnt really have a set rhyming scheme to it tho good job tho its higher than a 1 lol could u read my poem called dark angel? thanks hun and keep it up!

  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    It was cute!! A great idea!! But the flow was a little shakey to me!! It wasn't steady beat, which is what I most enjoy to read!! Pretty good job!! Keep writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I liked it. it was a cleaver idea. and woth more then a 1. i gave it a 4. great work

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Truthfully, i am not a fan of this poem, but it isnt worth a 1, its good enough for a 3 at the most.

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