Truthfully, i am not a fan of this poem, but it isnt worth a 1, its good enough for a 3 at the most.

I liked it. it was a cleaver idea. and woth more then a 1. i gave it a 4. great work

Ruby

It was cute!! A great idea!! But the flow was a little shakey to me!! It wasn't steady beat, which is what I most enjoy to read!! Pretty good job!! Keep writing!!

I liked it, it didnt really have a set rhyming scheme to it tho good job tho its higher than a 1 lol could u read my poem called dark angel? thanks hun and keep it up!