Rain Spirit

by Kim   Dec 3, 2005


Water droplets fell
Encircling his head in a luminous circlet
The light of the world
Burned in his pale watered-down eyes
Life stalled when confronted
By this flowing illusioned spirit
Sage in unspeakable ways
Clothed in purple shadow
Pleasure a backseat to knowledge
Then he smiled
And the skies wept with joy
Water droplets fall

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  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Wow, that's very good Kim. I really like the imagery in this poem. Haha, thanks alot for the comment, and the funny thing it, that one line, I was hesitant to put, but I couldn't find words to rhyme that would sound good haha. I will read the rest when I get back home :P

  • 18 years ago

    by Nathan

    I don't get it. many of your phrases seem disparate, but I did enjoy some words you chose to use and I love colors and rain

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