I don't get it. many of your phrases seem disparate, but I did enjoy some words you chose to use and I love colors and rain

Wow, that's very good Kim. I really like the imagery in this poem. Haha, thanks alot for the comment, and the funny thing it, that one line, I was hesitant to put, but I couldn't find words to rhyme that would sound good haha. I will read the rest when I get back home :P