by t. h a l l i d a y * Dec 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
My smiles are gone and so are you. |
by Danielle
That was so sad but really cute at the same time. I hope that she feels better soon! nicely writen~ |
by Krissy
Damn this poem is sad. i have a neice too and shes 4 yrs old idk wat i would do if anything happened to her. good poem i like it |
by HansRik
All of your poetry is depressing, but yet full of talent. Bravo. Hopefully,your niece will get better soon. Such situations are very painful, as you have portrayed in your poem. I sincerely hope everything goes well. Again, good job! |
Very well written and expressed poem, yuo really expressed the emotions in a powerful manor. welld one. |
This is amazing, keep writing, i think you really have a talent for this! |