Wow thiz iz a beautiful poem i exspecially lyke tha structure of it n tha rhythum n of corse ur choice of wordz ahhh wat tha hell i lyke tha everything about it lol keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8!!!!5/5

Thanks for the comment im rateing this poems a 5 its awsome:)

Great poem. How true that memories will last forever. I truly hope that you continue writing you displayed such a talent at expressing so much emotion. Keep it up.

--Sher