Broken up

by leilani   Dec 3, 2005


Like the sound of a tree falling
Loud in their hearts
A pain like no other
When they finally broke up
The tree resembles their love
As it grew to this day
Now it breaks and falls into the abyss

* i know its short but i wrote real fast for an engish assignment*

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  • 19 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    It's short, but its very good and powerful.... I love the way you wrote this poem... Great poem, hun!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Cheyanne

    Wow thiz iz a great poem u did a gud job keep up tha gud work!!!5/5