Comments : On With the Show

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    Wow!...truly sad poem. I love it, especially the 2cd and 3rd stanzas. keep up the good work. look forward to reading more.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Bill....
    Beautiful and heartfelt....I hate to read these sad ones from you. This was truly written with so much truth and sometimes I guess we all feel this way....Things happen for a reason most of the time and truthfully theres always another fish in the sea and sometimes the next love is better than the recent one....take care,
    Love Ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    Bill ,

    Chain up my heart
    No one gets in
    Make a new start
    Time to begin

    It truly does make me feel sad for you to be feeling these kinds of emotions .

    Learned my lesson in life
    Keep people at arms length
    Eliminates all the strife
    Keeps my strength

    I see you as a wonderful man and will refuse to see anything differently . I absolutly refuse to ... I know pain sometimes makes us want to chain up our hearts and let no one in but you have so much kindness to let out . And you have shown that over and over again many times .

  • Learned my lesson in life
    Keep people at arms length
    Eliminates all the strife
    Keeps my strength

    Chain up my heart
    No one gets in
    Make a new start
    Time to begin

    these are my favorite line..this poem is really heart felt and truthful..keep up the great work..

  • 18 years ago

    by avery

    Aw, i like this poem.
    its actually kinda how i feel.

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy

    Awesome poem i loved it!! Keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Chain up my heart
    No one gets in
    Make a new start
    Time to begin...
    Really strong words that you used for this poem. However, it show what your feelings were at the moment you wrote the poem. The poem itself its great, but I wish I could have done something to make this feelings go away. Some one like you, shouldn't feel like this. Take care my friend, great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by LonelyNightsHurt

    Hey, i should use that as i rule to my life, considerin im cuttin myslf over a guy that dont care, yeh, go brittany go..anyways, was good

  • 18 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Makes me want to cry. Keeping someone at arms length.. hope you will not do that. Chin up sweety!