Hey there!! i swear i wont copy ur poem dear as i know u must hv worked hard on such a beautiful poem.
i hv given 4 and that is due to the spelling mistakes that appears in ur poem as u hvn't cross checked ur poem after posting it..u can still edit as most of the users wont hv patience to guess what u wud hv meant at the places of those mistakes...so hurry up.

nice poem...once again...all the best

Thanks for the comment glad you liked my poem