I loved the idea of a porcelian doll breaking. it made it more emotional and dramatic. very well written.

I really like your poem 5/5 It's really unique and well written. Thanks for sharing and for your sweet and kind comment on my poem. You're an awesome poet yourself.

Very nice, i liked the idea it was very good.

Thankss for your comment, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

P.S My friend did the stars for me, sorry !! I'm useless with computers !!!! Lol xxx

I wish one day i will have half the talent you hav that was great keep writing