Our Haven

by Void   Dec 3, 2005


I remember the day he told me
About his secret escape
He spoke about his waterfall
The sound, colour and shape
Singing to me a picture
Of what looked like shattered glass
Where all emotions were soon lost
When the clashing waters crashed
He hides behind the waters wall
And dreams of us together
He tells me he would hold me
In his arms forever
Ever since he shared to me
The story of his haven
I think of it everytime I feel
As though my world will cave in
My sadness is washed away
My anger is wiped clean
I see me wrapped up in his arms
I'm safe from the unseen
Even though it's only imagination
I'm not quite with him yet
He made up this world for us
And I go there when I'm upset
Just to pretend that he's around
can make anything feel like home...
So please don't leave me love,
Or I'd have nowhere left to go

- I hope he'll love me forever-

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  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara

    This was definitely enjoyable!! I liked how you used love and vulnerability together as a topic!! They definitely go hand and hand!! Great job!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Syn

    I liked it alot.. and i though it was touching.. i cant do much critiquing im jsut not good at this .. but i did vote. even if you didnt vote on mine, *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up!

    sammie