by Void Dec 3, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
I remember the day he told me |
by Barbara
This was definitely enjoyable!! I liked how you used love and vulnerability together as a topic!! They definitely go hand and hand!! Great job!! |
by Syn
I liked it alot.. and i though it was touching.. i cant do much critiquing im jsut not good at this .. but i did vote. even if you didnt vote on mine, *5/5* |
by Samantha
Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up! |
by Samantha
Wow this is an amazing poem... your a teriffic writer... the only problem with this was there are a few spelling mistakes but thats ok because everything else was wonderful... keep it up! |