Love it i can relate

I rated this at a 4 because it is a good poem I like it, but again the flow of it is off. I understand the subject of it witch is good. I can see emotion in it also a good thing. GOOD JOB

Hey. ive just read all ur poems. very good! and i can definatly relate 2 most of them!! This Josh kid..... seriously.. move on! I know its hard but i've been there b4 and all i wanted 2 do is turn round and have him back, no matter how he hurt me i just wanted him 2 hold me and be mine again! but lucky im over my ex now and im ready to move on. u shud b too! Great poems, keep it up! Please read mine too and let me know wat u think.xx Cheers.xx