This poem..was one I felt I had to finish ready right after the first few lines. Very well written. Deserves nothing other then a 5/5.

I wanted more
good job
xxxx

Hey
this is a really kool poem, different to what i thought it would be but i really really liked it, your really talented.

sara

I love it! I wish I wrote this well. 5/5!

Fantasitc. I like this poem. You made the reader feel the emotions very well and the flow of this poem was perfect, no flaws what so ever. You're a very talented writer! :) Keep it up!

Stephanie

This one along with the soldure poems are my absolute favorites! What I like most about your poems are the meanings. They realllly get to me. I chose this one because of the title, because I like things that are origonal and out of the ordinary, so it caught my attention. I am now a huge fan and admirer of your work. JUst thought I should let you know! And any time you need a comment feel free to comment mine and I will be sure to comment back. Thanks
~skittles

Your poem is awesome!!!! iT is soo true.! I love the ryhming. I love the title and the flow was absolutly amazing! Keep it up!!! 5/5 Rachel

Wow. this is very powerful. when I read this I felt like I was at an AFI concert for some reason. it just sounds like something they would sing, I guess. Wonderfully written and your chorus was awesome. 5/5

Nice...some vivid imagery...nice flow...overall it was a good piece. The beginning line was a great hook. This piece kept attention throughout and remained cool til the end. Excellent. Each line was well done and each were able to complement each other. Awesome write and the last line was too cool.
~Faith-less

Oh wow...
I absolutely loved this.
I thought it was very well written, and I loved the rhyme scheme, flow and wording.
I thought the repitition used was excellent.
One of my favourite poems.
Well done.

The ruthem was smooth and even through out the poem. it was well written and so many poeple could relate.

OHMY. I cannot even say anything bad about this piece. It is SO good. Oh wow.. good work.. lovely.

This is really good. I like the repetition of the second stanza. It seemed to give the poem an even sadder effect to it. I really like the topic that you chose. You described everything so well in this. And I could definitely relate to it. Great job on this! 5/5

Wow this poem is amazing. i love it. i gave it a 5!

Another great poem i liked the way you re-used a verse
And they sing about hurt
And they sing about pain
They tell us what they do
To hide all the shame
And the tears start flowing
As the music starts to feed
And the face gets sadder
And the mascara starts to bleed
it really added to the poem, it was very good you're a great writer 5/5

About a rock concert Im guessing? Great flow, great poem!

Excellent write.

I like how you used
"And they sing about hurt
And they sing about pain
They tell us what they do
To hide all the shame
And the tears start flowing
As the music starts to feed
And the face gets sadder
And the mascara starts to bleed"

every other stanza, it made it really interesting to read. another 5/5

Allanah

Wow I love your poem! I like these 3 lines :) I enjoyed your work! 5/5! btw thanks for the comment.

* I like the way you repeat these 3 lines*

As the music starts to feed
And the face gets sadder
And the mascara starts to bleed

Wow this was so intreguing(sp?) I really loved the repeated stanza it was beautiful and wonderfuly placed especially considering the length of it.. Nothing sounded forced in this and thats one major downfall of long poems like this one. such a wonderful topic.. yet again very different and very interesting. nice job.

WOW! I really love this one! the seconed to last stanza is, for me, the best part! It also has a lyrical quailty. really great! 5/5!