Real Love

by Grotesque Angel   Dec 3, 2005


Never said that love was fair,
Never thought it mattered,
But now the feeling that we share,
Suddenly is shattered

The pieces of my soul you take,
Upon the evening star,
Now I found that you were fake,
Just a fleeting scar

I rip the dagger from my back,
Now your heart it seeks

© Copyright 2005 By: Grotesque Angel

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  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    This is so sad! i love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    I like this a lot, interesting idea that you'd use the same weapon that someone used to stab you in the back to hurt them. I like that. 5/5
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by HJ

    Wonderful poem...Honest and heartfelt. I really like your style of writing.

    Look forward to reading more.

    Regards
    Hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    *tears* yeah, knives generally hurt when thrust into your back by someone you thought loved you.

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