Good poem. I could visualize everything. pretty discribtive. 5/5
Good job

It was very powerful

O i don't know if i commented you about this but i love this poem! I love it!

I love this poem so much and i love the way the lines are so short yet so effective! it was amazing to read and i realllly liked it.
xo adge

I love this poem.its really good.deffinately a 5/5

I loved this poem. I loked the way it flowed. I gave it a 5!!! You have areal talent for writing so keep it up. =)