This was really a really true and emotional poem! I really like it. It touched me! Good job mate!

Well done! The emotion conveyed in this is so raw, I like that! Oh and the ending, just wow! So powerfully put. Take care and keep it up~Holly

Loved the ending... it was an extremly good write... i cant see that you are very talented.. keep it up...

sammie

My funeral gone, it was so black, I've fallen now, I won't come back.
I'll keep your secrets, I will not tell.
Just know it aint over, I'll see you in hell!

this is from me and natasha to all the guys reading!! .. lol!!

Hey, honestly...that was a great stanza...and i really loved ur poem. The whole message is amazing and the way it has been xpressed.

Just wondering...if this poem had some imaginations also rather than all being true.

Well, if u ever need in ur life feel like...
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lending money...let it be me!!

cheer up dear...life is meant to be rude & to survive..we must fight back.

5/5...fantastic work...once again

This is strange as it talks about suicide in an almost positive way - but I liked your different take on it. I didn't really like the last line though, I thought it was too harsh to end the poem on. But apart from that, nice job.

Wow. so powerful and just wow.

Anger and despair......I find that life is full of these as is your poem. Who can say what someone should do when faced with such sadness......