Love it... 5/5

Wow i really like this poem its soo powerful keep up the good writing!:)

X-Fallen Angel-X

Your last sentance sound appealing to me. At least that way you wouldn't have to die alone.

Hey thats a really amazing poem, it all falls and flows perfectly!
great job, mel

Amazing!

U really know how to catch your readers, I love it, keep it up! your awesome... 5/5 my breath was taken away

Very dark. I like it!