Christian, that was good. Although it doesnt really tell us why you are this way? I hope you feel better sweetie.

-Jennifer.

Overall Rating: 4/5

It's good. I like the way you end it with part of the beginning. Strong emotions that are relayed well make it powerful. Great peice.

I love this poem... shows how im feeling right now...its a great poem

Kuya...beautiful poem... i know exactly how you feel... these kind of poems are great coz everyone can always relate....

neway...i havent seen you online lately :(( hope to catch you sometime.

well cya *cute pic by the way* Ü

love.lexxi.

That was beautiful.....
i liked the ending its like so so so purdy............lol
sorry im hyper and i really mean that it is BEAUTIFUL

Niiiceeeee poem
and i will never believe you...lol

gtg cya keep writing

Omg ur poems are soooo amazing tthat is soooooooooooooo good. I just loved the way it flowed~love always britt

I like the rhyme scheme it gives a sort of rhythm and sense of monotony, like it keeps on happening. I also like the way you link the end back to the beginning. Great poem, well done :P

Wow i like your poem keep it up

Another great write. You need to post more poems!

Ahh Dumpling!!!
I will always be here for you through thin and thick just tell me your problems and we will work through them ^^ YAY! lol xxxx love yee loads mwah xx Roxy