Never & Forever

by Laura Ash   Dec 3, 2005


1 is the number of times you said "I love you too"
2 is the number of feelings I knew
3 is the number of times I felt we were close
4 is the number of times you were loyal at the most
5 was the number of times you were my my side
6 months ago was the most I had ever cried
7 is the grade we met
8 is the grade my heart relized it will never be unbent
9 is the grade I hope we meet again
10 was the month our love came to an end
Never is when I'll forget you
Forever is how long I'll wait for you to mean the words "I love you too"

Dedicated to K.E.

Anyone can say "I love you too"
But it takes someone true to you to mean "I love you too"

You said it but didn't mean it.

Written on November 24, 2005

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  • 18 years ago

    by rar

    Very good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Oh God, I dont know why I took so long to get back to you for commenting on my poem, but I so regret it, cus I loved them u are really good...

    Love

    ::MELI::

    ~1~

  • 18 years ago

    by just a poet

    I know what you mean. a guy told me he loved me so many times but it was just words without its rhyme. well meaning. u no wt i mean. i hope u feel better soon. i no it takes a long time to get over someone but i hope you dont suffer as much as i did. it is such a simple poem that has a lot of effect and thou not obvious i can tell its written with feeling and i can feel the pain and sorow u have put into your words. gd poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    0h tuching lines. i liked the strvuture. g0od j0b. very well written. thank u f0r the c0mment 0n my w0rk. it mean al0t t0 me!
    l0tz 0f l0ve/d0ra

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