I think out of the poems i've read from you this one has been the best. filled with feeling and passion and tells a stroy. i like stories like this, discribe a different girl yet at the end it turns out to be you. please stop cutting u'll be hurting those around you and well if u ever need someone to talk to there are amny poeple here who'd willingly listen me included. take care. xx

5/5 btw

Hhh hun a heartfelt piece with em0ti0n. g0od j0v expressing urself. very well written 0nce again! keep em c0ming! =)
l0tz 0f l0ve /d0ra

Love this poem..... very lovely

Loved your poem you got a 5 vote take care hun sarah x x x

Loved the poem - great ending!!

Truly your best ( for now lol ) :) excellent ending and amazingly written
keep it up :)

~StefQ